The Hong Kong sexy photo gate effect has extended to Taiwan. Police has arrested a netizen who shared photos with others under local obscenity censorship law. Portnoy pointed out that the police has no power to define the nature of the photos, and Taiwanese has the right to enjoy pleasure. He urged for the immediate release of the netizen (zh).
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Just some friendly advice that the articles in globalvoicesonline.com could use an English editor.
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(e)an error or an incorrect or poorly chosen word/words(e)
{note about an important question that needs to be addressed}
The Hong Kong (‘)sexy photo gate(‘) effect has extended to Taiwan. Police (e)has(e)(have) arrested a netizen who shared photos with others under local obscenity censorship law. Portnoy {Who is Portnoy?} pointed out that the police (e)has(e)(have) no power to (e)definite(e) (define) the nature of the photos, and (that the) Taiwanese (e)has(e) (have) the (e)rights(e) (right) to enjoy (themselves) (e)pleasure(e). He urged for the immediate release of the netizen (zh).
Please don’t take this the wrong way! I think it is wonderful that so many of you are choosing to develop your English by writing articles in this languague. But typically the English is flawed (sometimes very badly flawed). I’m hoping that the authors are willing to use this as a learning experience.
friendly editor